umm...too many hallucinagins

VodKa · Joined: 05 Sep 2007 Posts: 111 Location: middle America

I walk down
the corridors
of my mind
and i try to
find a way
out but the
maze is turning
my eyes are
burning and
everything is
churning the
bright light
is burning
my throat
as i scream
words that
dont even
make any sense because my brain is scrambled from the drugs i paid my comfort for and i cant even make it stop make it stop make it stop

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Evilbadwrong · Joined: 06 Sep 2007 Posts: 56 Location: Washington state

Wow...pretty intense! This really inspired some interesting images in my head. Nicely done! Smile

Evilbadwrong

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SirTravers · Joined: 04 Sep 2007 Posts: 43 Location: Hobbs, NM. USA

reminds me of being stuck in "Doom" or "Castle Wolfenstein." Those games always got me ill.

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PoeticGrl · Joined: 14 Sep 2007 Posts: 2

I really like this poem, Vodka.. it is really really good, and intense.. I can feel the emotion in it. good work Smile

VodKa · Joined: 05 Sep 2007 Posts: 111 Location: middle America

thank you, but wasnt *really* work. just a description of what you feel like after tripping for like 3 days straight Wink

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